Game Pitch Document - Other Blog Comments

Here are my three comments on other blogs about the topic above:

John Aromando's Blog
- You should add some images to this document to add more intrigue.

 Olivia Gutiérrez
- This looks good, but needs some images to visualize the game's essence.

 Evan D. LeClair
- I like the image. Although, it isn't clear whether this is a game pitch or a summary of how to play chess, that problem can easily be solved with a title that provides the needed clarity. Also, try to keep it within one page. This can be done by resizing and repositioning the image.


Response to other comments on my previous blog post:

- Well, unfortunately I did not receive any comments. That is for the third straight week now. Nonetheless, I will improve on the Game Pitch Document I posted earlier by adding some images to visualize the essence of the game being proposed. Also, I want to highlight certain elements of the text in different ways such as bold letters and bigger font sizes. The aim is to make the pitch document more clear and concise for its readers.

 Thanks for reading.